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I think it’s probably fairly safe to say that if you were actually starving and desperate you’d eat just about anything
Possibly, I’m still not eating that ice cream Damien spit in
*~ MAJK ~*
Of course not, you’re not starving
They should probably eat what they’re feeding the zombies instead of the zombies. Makes more sense unless you can clarify how the zombies can be well-fed with proteins and antibiotics, while the nonzombies need to eat zombies. Plus your graphic ruins any chance of a twist. Let’s everyone know right away there are humans in the pen, not animals.
Thanks for reading through it. You have some interesting points. Maybe in a longer piece, exploring that might be fun, I definitely will look into working up that aspect. Naturally, an off the cut short piece will have a muddy point or two. Thanks for bring these up – they may help this evolve into a longer, more detailed account.
As for the graphic, it was chosen as a bit of a give away. I’m sorry it ruined it for you. Most others mentioned that it was a great creepy twist or that it caught them flat footed. I’m guessing you read a lot of horror because even without the graphic a big horror fan might see this coming a mile off.
I appreciate your comments – every reader that offers honest commentary also offers the writer a broader perspective.
*~ MAJK ~*
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